Todd's Creative Fix Example 1 – Facebook Ad

Hello Fellow Marketer,

Clients often call me in to help fix their creative. “It’s not strong enough, Todd, and this is an important campaign.”

Sometimes I direct their own creative team, other times I handle it myself (I do integrated copywriting-plus-design). Here’s an example from a national campaign...

Strategic Fix 1 of 7 – Facebook Ad

BEFORE Todd's Fix
AFTER Todd's Fix

Before: This campaign – on Facebook, Google, and YouTube – had no teeth. There was no offer. (Note: I changed the product category for this example.)

After: 1) A great interactive page already existed on the client's website, so we offered it as “An online Tool” – it even tied into their eCommerce store. 2) Copy was added to the Facebook images, and... 3) The ads were given a strong call-to-action. The old ads performed badly, the new ads performed extremely well.

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-Todd

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Update on Todd:  I now charge less, and I’m currently available to work with a couple of new clients. As a freelance Creative Director, a few hours of my input here and there can really help the cause. Please call or drop an email anytime:

Todd’s mobile 248-417-1939  and email todd@toddlerneradvertising.com

 See other examples from this series:  1 of 7   2 of 7   3 of 7   4 of 7   5 of 7   6 of 7   7 of 7 

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Todd Lerner Advertising

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